Age/Gender: 22, Female
Location: A locked Cell
Job: Student
Belly buttons creep me out.
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Flash Reviews: 47
Music Reviews: 1
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47 Reviews | 14 w/ Responses
good game, good message
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Hey i really like this, maybe it would be better tho if you could click to play the movie, a loading screen?
otherwise people may think that it's crashed when waiting to watch the movie after reading the intro?
just some suggestions
Author's Response:
Yeah i was going to add one but my USB went through the wash so i couldn't add the preloader.
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"so you ditched the smiley face?"
hey, i saw your first attempt- i think it would be better to be in english. if you needed it to be online for school there are safer placest (more realiable & school frinedly) than newgrounds.
Author's Response:
Really? I can't play the file in school-computers other than via internet and I'm too lazy to write a code on a .html (which works, I've tried). Youtube or Video.Google don't work 'cause I'd have to delete all my animations and do everything by hand. inkl. every single fading!
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hey, it's slightly sticky when you fail a mission and it's a little confusing where there's 2 people who have a hat on in the plane, maybe you should say something like civillians can wear hats too. a little music would be nice.
good effot, keep at it ^.^
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maybe slow it down a little- not a lot,
make a sotry of it? put an unexpected ending?
check out the fourm for good places to get sound.
keep working on it, you get a 6 for work in progess
velvet x
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It's Hard you can barly control the doll!!! but i'll give you a 2/10, for the doll
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hey this is a nice tidy animation, you just need a bit more length and maybe some more story, keep at it !
Author's Response:
Im Glad You Liked It.
Thanks For The Review!
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maybe make the text slightly bigger?
Author's Response:
Hmmm, it was quite big enough for me, maybe you have a smaller screen?
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it was alright sorta dragged a bit but i really like the fact you had a sound board at the end and other extra bits, its little things like that that pick it up.
velv x
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especiaslly the complexed simplisty of it, it that makes sence. i think that it would have slightly improved it if it was all in black and white as it started off.
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